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PostSubject: Ryuu Hyuuga Jutsu's   Wed Apr 29, 2015 9:06 am

Name:Seven Heavens Breathing Technique
Rank:N/A
Type:Supplementary
Element:N/A
Clan:N/A
Description:A taijutsu breathing method that Shira invented by gathering up large amounts of oxygen to increase his lung capacity fourfold, he is granted strength similar to the Eight Gates, even including similar physical changes to the user. It is unknown if it comes with the same repercussions as the Eight Gates.

The first activation (第一活性, daiichi kassei) Ryuu's eyes to go completely white and he starts to give off a yellow aura. His speed and strength is increased 2x.
The second activation (第二活性, daini kassei) causes his body to expand slightly, his muscles becoming distinctly more prominent. This is a stronger version of the first activation. His skin begans to get an Orangish color as his muscles swell up. His speed and strength is increased by 3x
The third activation (第三活性, daisan kassei) causes his skin to go red and appears roughly equivalent to the Gate of Life. His speed and strength is increased by 4x. This is the last activation known.

After using the First Activation he gets slightly tired. 
After using the Second Activation he gets really tired.
After using the Third Activation he comes very close to passing out.

The Increase Oxygen makes his muscles bigger and stronger allowing him to be stronger and faster. The Activation 1-3 will last 3 post with the activation being counted. After that, Ryuu has two post with minimal movement.


Name:Gentle Fist
Rank:D
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Element:N/A
Clan:Hyuuga
Description: Not really at jutsu but I will be using this technique so I thought it would balance it. The user with the Byukugan active fights with palms open and hits chakra points in the opponents body by pushing his chakra through the body. Can also target organs as well.

Name:Byakugan
Rank:D
Type:Kekkei Genkai
Element:N/A
Clan:Hyuuga
Description:Gain 360 degree vision, can detect chakra seal barriers, and can determine when a genjutsu is being used. Know to have greater vision and insight than sharingan. The users eyes when activated can see 100 feet further and through objects. The user can also see the flow of chakra in a persons body. (At this level will become better at higher levels)


Name:Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Palms
Rank: C
Type:Kekkei Genkai
Element:N/A
Clan:Hyuuga
Description:The 'Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Palms is a move used by Hyuuga with the usage of the Byakugan. It hits a small amount of pressure points enough to disrupt an opponents chakra movement. Causing pain to organs and some limbs.


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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Hyuuga Jutsu's   Wed Apr 29, 2015 9:29 am

@Mojo20013 wrote:
Name:Water Needle
Rank:C
Type:Kekkei Genkai
Element:Water
Clan:Hyuuga
Description:With generating small water vortexes using chakra and water, the user can use them to hit anything with using the Byakugan. It can cause small cuts on a human or slice things like bees.  

Name:Gentle Fist
Rank:D
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Element:N/A
Clan:Hyuuga
Description: Not really at jutsu but I will be using this technique so I thought it would balance it. The user with the Byukugan active fights with palms open and hits chakra points in the opponents body by pushing his chakra through the body. Can also target organs as well.

Name:Byakugan
Rank:D
Type:Kekkei Genkai
Element:N/A
Clan:Hyuuga
Description:Gain 360 degree vision, can detect chakra seal barriers, and can determine when a genjutsu is being used. Know to have greater vision and insight than sharingan. The users eyes when activated can see 100 feet further and through objects. The user can also see the flow of chakra in a persons body. (At this level will become better at higher levels)


Name:Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Palms
Rank: C
Type:Kekkei Genkai
Element:N/A
Clan:Hyuuga
Description:The 'Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Palms is a move used by Hyuuga with the usage of the Byakugan. It hits a small amount of pressure points enough to disrupt an opponents chakra movement. Causing pain to organs and some limbs.

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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Hyuuga Jutsu's   Mon May 04, 2015 6:21 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Hyuuga Jutsu's   Mon May 04, 2015 9:47 pm

So for the Seven Heaven Gates i need you to specify the repercussions, specify post length, specify what happens during the repercussion post period, and some more examples as to what the increased oxygen does.

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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Hyuuga Jutsu's   Tue May 05, 2015 6:02 am

I made the changes
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Hyuuga Jutsu's   Tue May 05, 2015 4:23 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Hyuuga Jutsu's   Tue May 05, 2015 4:53 pm

@Mojo20013 wrote:
Name:Seven Heavens Breathing Technique
The first activation (第一活性, daiichi kassei) causes Shira's eyes to go completely white and he starts to give off a yellow aura.
The second activation (第二活性, daini kassei) causes his body to expand slightly, his muscles becoming distinctly more prominent.
The third activation (第三活性, daisan kassei) causes his skin to go red and appears roughly equivalent to the Gate of Life.

So there is no difference in ability from first and second and third activation?

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After using the First Activation he gets slightly tired. 
After using the Second Activation he gets really tired.
After using the Third Activation he comes very close to passing out.

But if he activates the next gate right after.. when does he get tired?

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The Increase Oxygen makes his muscles bigger and stronger allowing him to be stronger and faster. Each Activation lasts 3 posts before he can either move onto the next one or go back to normal 

Nine posts of increased stamina/strength is a bit much.


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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Hyuuga Jutsu's   Tue May 05, 2015 4:55 pm

He gets tired after the activation and is 2 per activation count? The activations are basically like gates. But they make you bulky. @Logic
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Hyuuga Jutsu's   Tue May 05, 2015 4:56 pm

@Mojo20013 wrote:
He gets tired after the activation and is 2 per activation count? The activations are basically like gates. But they make you bulky. @Logic

I need an accurate description of what is happening when you use each activation. I don't see a difference between each activation, just a change in aura or skin color.

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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Hyuuga Jutsu's   Tue May 05, 2015 4:59 pm

Alright i made some changes. Is that better? @Logic
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Hyuuga Jutsu's   Tue May 05, 2015 9:18 pm

The changes in aura/skin color are not telling us what the jutsu is doing. If it's increasing your speed, you need to state that and give some descriptions on how much it is increasing speed by. If it's increasing your strength, that needs to be stated relative to base lines as well. This are the information that we need, not what color your eyes are turning or what aura is building up around you.

Furthermore, as something that's supposed to be similar to the gates in terms of effects, you're going to need to have the same restrictions and limitations, such as a 3 post duration with the activation being counted (total for any/all the states) with a 2 post minimal movement period afterwards.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Hyuuga Jutsu's   Wed May 06, 2015 7:01 am

I made the changes.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Hyuuga Jutsu's   Wed May 06, 2015 7:42 am

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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Hyuuga Jutsu's   Wed May 06, 2015 2:51 pm

@Mojo20013 wrote:
Name:Seven Heavens Breathing Technique
Rank:N/A
Type:Supplementary
Element:N/A
Clan:N/A
Description:A taijutsu breathing method that Shira invented by gathering up large amounts of oxygen to increase his lung capacity fourfold, he is granted strength similar to the Eight Gates, even including similar physical changes to the user. It is unknown if it comes with the same repercussions as the Eight Gates.

The first activation (第一活性, daiichi kassei) Ryuu's eyes to go completely white and he starts to give off a yellow aura. His speed and strength is increased 2x.
The second activation (第二活性, daini kassei) causes his body to expand slightly, his muscles becoming distinctly more prominent. This is a stronger version of the first activation. His skin begans to get an Orangish color as his muscles swell up. His speed and strength is increased by 3x
The third activation (第三活性, daisan kassei) causes his skin to go red and appears roughly equivalent to the Gate of Life. His speed and strength is increased by 4x. This is the last activation known.

After using the First Activation he gets slightly tired. 
After using the Second Activation he gets really tired.
After using the Third Activation he comes very close to passing out.

The Increase Oxygen makes his muscles bigger and stronger allowing him to be stronger and faster. The Activation 1-3 will last 3 post with the activation being counted. After that, Ryuu has two post with minimal movement.


Name:Gentle Fist
Rank:D
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Element:N/A
Clan:Hyuuga
Description: Not really at jutsu but I will be using this technique so I thought it would balance it. The user with the Byukugan active fights with palms open and hits chakra points in the opponents body by pushing his chakra through the body. Can also target organs as well.

Name:Byakugan
Rank:D
Type:Kekkei Genkai
Element:N/A
Clan:Hyuuga
Description:Gain 360 degree vision, can detect chakra seal barriers, and can determine when a genjutsu is being used. Know to have greater vision and insight than sharingan. The users eyes when activated can see 100 feet further and through objects. The user can also see the flow of chakra in a persons body. (At this level will become better at higher levels)


Name:Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Palms
Rank: C
Type:Kekkei Genkai
Element:N/A
Clan:Hyuuga
Description:The 'Eight Trigrams Thirty-Two Palms is a move used by Hyuuga with the usage of the Byakugan. It hits a small amount of pressure points enough to disrupt an opponents chakra movement. Causing pain to organs and some limbs.

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